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08/22/2002 02:49:00 AM |
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08/21/2002 05:35:00 PM |
| I find this too cluttered. I'd have preferred to have just the sketch with the hand holding the pencil. |
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08/21/2002 01:47:00 AM |
| mmm the idea is good but the execution could have been better. not much depth in the image (no perspective) makes it dull and not very dynamic. lighting is very flat too. |
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08/20/2002 06:12:00 AM |
| This is really clever on the eye. I love the surreal size illusion created within the shot; it all looks so normal at first glance, but when you look closely there's more to this picture than first meets the eyeâ€Â¦ Are they really giant pens? Great shot – worthy 10â€Â¦ |
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08/20/2002 05:19:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?10,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool
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08/20/2002 02:56:00 AM |
Interesting idea. What does TICONDEROGA mean? Composition doesn't grab me. Wonder what it would be like taken from other angles?
Kavey |
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08/19/2002 08:27:00 PM |
| I really like this picture, but i would have made the entire pencil in his hand be visible. 8. |
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08/19/2002 03:55:00 PM |
| You put the eraser where the eraser should go. At the end of the pencil!! I love it! That is really cute. The lighting is good, the shadows are subtle enough they aren't distracting. However, toward the pinky finger on the hand, there is a dark outline going around the finger and down the back of the hand. I tried to enlarge it and change the lighting to figure out what was making it, and I actually couldn't figure out if it was a funny dark shadow, or if you may have moved your hand while the photo was being taken. Anyway, If i'm getting that picky, then you have a nice photo. Good luck with the challenge. |
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08/19/2002 11:22:00 AM |
| Creative, cleaver, colorful, fun. This is a great job.....BRAVO!! Score 8 ~Kee |
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08/19/2002 10:29:00 AM |
| the eraser is in the perfect place! it makes me laugh |
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08/19/2002 07:08:00 AM |
| clever idea, but the composition doesn't thrill me. Perhaps if the other things looked like they were (or could be) used and echoed the angle/direction of the "pencil sketch" |
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08/19/2002 05:38:00 AM |
| That is a pretty cool idea. Reminds me of that guy on the show "art attack" (not sure if you've heard of it) when there's a camera high up and this guy makes a whole picture out of either strange objects or salt. That eraser gave me that feeling. |
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08/18/2002 10:02:00 PM |
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