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04/19/2007 02:01:18 PM |
| Well, I don't really like the fact the light is very bright right on her nose, but everything else is beautiful! I love the details, and the shallow DOF. |
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01/14/2007 03:09:44 PM |
| great use of shallow dof here. excellent work. my only nit is that you might think about blurring the pores in the cheek a little bit to put all of the focus on the eye. |
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01/14/2007 04:15:00 AM |
| would have preferred more control of the depth of field to either focus both eyes, or to focus on just one with a smaller dof. |
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01/12/2007 09:12:42 AM |
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01/11/2007 12:43:30 PM |
| I think the photo would be stronger if both eyes were in focus |
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01/10/2007 09:36:55 PM |
| Both eyes must be focused otherwise too jarring. Not a portrait. Good picture otherwise. 5 |
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01/10/2007 07:58:07 PM |
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01/10/2007 05:47:02 PM |
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01/10/2007 02:25:04 PM |
| I looks like you may have used a blur tool on the left eye, perhaps to make an unintentional blue from the camera appear more intentional. Focus is definitely drawn to the right eye, and I suspect that's what you were going for. But I'm not convinced that it's working for this composition. Have you considered simply cropping the left eye out entirely, generating a more rectanglar composition that ends at the nose bridge? |
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01/10/2007 08:29:56 AM |
| Unfortunately the texture of the skin is not good |
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01/09/2007 11:33:02 PM |
| To make this work you could have added some Blur and rubbed through as it would get away from the distraction of the Skin spoures, and it would have made a better impression with the eyes. |
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01/09/2007 07:22:41 PM |
ahahaha when i first glanced at the title i thought it said "three eyes"... i was searching for the 3rd! :)
nicely done. i like the freckles! |
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01/09/2007 07:17:04 PM |
| would have been a stronger image with both eyes in focus. I like the tight crop though. |
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