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01/16/2007 08:09:31 AM |
| The beads are trying to steal the show. You have an attractive model, but the first thing that caught my attention is the beads she is holding. They are brighter than her face and naturally draw attention. Overall, I think her face is a little soft (would like to see her eyes sharper). One side item is her lips/lipstick - the way the lighter color appears to be between her upper and bottom lip, it looks like the tip of her tongue is sticking out. :) All of the above is JMO of course. Best of luck to you in the challenge. |
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01/15/2007 10:48:15 AM |
Nice entry here. I like the way her hands and the beads frame her face.
Good luck |
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01/14/2007 04:01:15 AM |
| I think it would have been better without the beads. |
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01/13/2007 06:30:43 PM |
| IMHO, every bit of light value in the frame that is not the face, distracts from the face. I know this is rather picky, but this is quite good. I might try to get a bit more shadow on the left side of the face. |
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01/12/2007 09:28:59 AM |
| Could use a tad more focus IMO. I cannot find the focal point. |
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01/11/2007 06:42:51 AM |
| I think you captured her world |
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01/10/2007 12:53:14 PM |
| This would really stand out if the eyes were sharper/in focus versus the lips. Otherwise, nicely captured. |
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01/10/2007 08:09:03 AM |
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01/10/2007 07:18:10 AM |
| I really like some of the contrasting tones. Are the eyes a little out of focus? |
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01/10/2007 02:29:36 AM |
| seems a little out of focus.. |
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01/09/2007 07:35:52 PM |
| softer light would really make this image. |
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