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01/17/2007 03:53:15 AM |
From the Critique Club
I like the fact that he is in the middle of the picture, it suites him.
You used a rather big aperture so a little amount of the picture is in focus. It comes out nicely.
The background is distracting for me, it would had been better if it was straighter.
One can also see where you cloned out something next to the year.
The light is nice, no harsh shadows or blown out highlights.
But you are missing so many tones of black and white in it, it's mostly just grey. This is easily fixable with levels and curves in Photoshop.
I think you might also consider a little tighter cropping.
The pose is nice; he doesn̢۪t look scary at all to me.
Feel free to contact me through the PM system if you have any comments or questions about my critique.
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01/12/2007 04:03:19 PM |
| Nice warm shot. Could use a bit more cropping right and bottom IMO. - 7 |
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01/11/2007 06:27:07 PM |
| This has nice potential but there are no mid tones. Maybe a levels adjustment would give it more pop. |
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01/10/2007 07:41:13 AM |
| This could be a nice portrait, but the man looks too uncontrasty against the very black background. Otherwise it's good. |
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01/10/2007 05:24:14 AM |
| Sweet simple and well done. |
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