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01/21/2007 05:39:28 PM |
From the Critique Club
How are you doing today? I am going to touch on a few items with your image.
Colour;
Your colour looks fairly nice here, I just think there is a bit to much yellow on your chest, which could be from your spotlight? everything else seems to balance nicely, the blue/gray of the shorts matches the weights, your skin tone matches the carpet, bottle lable matches wieghts. Very nice job.
DOF/Focus;
Focus looks really great here, everything apears to be in focus. I can even make out the carpet strands, and read the beer label.
Post;
You didn't do much for post, and mostly it appears you didn't have to. The blacks look black the lights are light, and the medium tones are nice. One thing I might have done, is maybe dodge a bit on the chair, to see more of the leg coming down, and a hint of seat. Just a horizon't glint you might say. The way it appears now, at first glance you seem to be floating.
Off Items;
As I said before, your chest seems a bit yellow. Also, the back of your head fades a tad much I think into the background. A really soft highlight to see the back of your head may give a stronger feel. You could do this with a reflector.
Other;
I think this is a clever idea. You captured the procrastination very well. I just noticed the beer cap still on the bottle? I am assuming it was left to see the top of the bottle., if that is the case you might have angled the light a bit different to get the top. But if that is not the case and a highlight.. than you are good to go.
Nice Job
Andrew 'littlegett' |
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01/14/2007 04:04:57 PM |
| great light....I'm sure that you will be in the top 10 |
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01/13/2007 06:41:56 PM |
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01/12/2007 08:51:30 AM |
| Eh, you don't have enough of a gut to make this truly convincing. I like the way you've spotlighted the weights and you, though. |
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01/11/2007 05:01:30 PM |
| easy to do. nice shot and subject |
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01/10/2007 12:14:56 AM |
+ : good challenge topic
+ : Well thought out
- : Did we REALLY need to see that! LOL! ;) |
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01/09/2007 08:43:30 AM |
| I think this is a hard challenge to pull off. It seems a difficult subject to portray in a photograph, but you did it. Best of the challenge IMO. Good Luck. |
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01/09/2007 05:47:55 AM |
| This is VERY good....you are definitely telling the right story here. You don't even need the title.. EXCELLENT job of fitting the challenge. 10 |
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01/08/2007 10:51:38 AM |
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01/08/2007 07:53:26 AM |
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01/08/2007 04:59:52 AM |
| Yeah...I been saying that for years now :-) Good idea and photo-8 |
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01/07/2007 10:49:31 PM |
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01/07/2007 08:54:27 PM |
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01/07/2007 08:25:18 PM |
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01/07/2007 07:43:12 PM |
| Very Funny and I can relate to it |
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01/07/2007 07:38:02 PM |
| At last, a shot that actually relates to procrastinattion! |
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