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01/24/2007 01:55:59 PM |
Thank you very much Lori. In the original size you could see almost every single pore, so too much smoothness is I guess due to resizing. But I will consider your critique and find a solution for this. Also thanks for cheking out my website. That photo is also one of my many self-portraits. |
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01/21/2007 11:14:11 AM |
Nice shot Eren, but you cloned out all the naturally occuring pores around the nose/cheeks which tends to look artificial especially for men. Otherwise cool, I like your expression...makes me wonder what you were going to say :-)
P.S. excellent shot of you on your website
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01/17/2007 08:34:40 AM |
Thank you all for the constructive critiques and the compliments. They are very much appreciated. |
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01/16/2007 07:57:30 AM |
Great B&W tones and a good capture of your (expressive) eyes. |
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01/14/2007 09:20:13 PM |
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01/14/2007 06:38:24 AM |
nice portrait and a nice model. :) |
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01/13/2007 11:59:34 PM |
good composition and retained skin texture with good lighting |
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01/13/2007 02:09:06 PM |
Very clear and focused. Nicely composed. Good luck. |
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01/13/2007 10:03:58 AM |
Nice clean portrait. Back to bump you up to 8. |
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01/13/2007 09:51:33 AM |
great picture, nice composition, wonderful tonality |
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01/12/2007 05:44:59 PM |
Very nice, Good comp and the tones are also exceptional. |
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01/12/2007 05:02:16 PM |
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01/12/2007 08:26:54 AM |
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01/11/2007 02:52:42 PM |
I like your choice of framing for this shot. It very much adds drama. I will definetly being stealing this idea :) nice shot |
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01/11/2007 12:56:08 PM |
Skin is just a bit too "plastsized" for me, otherwise really good, 6
Jack |
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01/11/2007 12:25:55 PM |
I like the framing. I think the face is a little too PP'd/overexposeed, though. Also, would have liked to have seen more of your hair. |
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01/11/2007 05:07:09 AM |
One of my top 3 of the challenge - incredible! |
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01/11/2007 01:20:18 AM |
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01/10/2007 09:35:50 PM |
this kills, so handsome it is..... i want a phone number for a shooting with you :) no joke |
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01/10/2007 02:28:02 PM |
Good skin tones, sharpness, composition and b&w values. Well done! |
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01/10/2007 12:59:11 PM |
Love the composition and light, but the pic false apart with the edit. The skin looks plastic..and unreal. The lips are not very masculine. So for me a zeven. |
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01/10/2007 11:57:24 AM |
Laurent?
Ok, there is a raging debte about people's voting habits at the moment, so i will attempt to give a detailed comment with my vote:
good use of bokeh. Nice and sharp. nice proginal perspective. good lighting. as a photo is stands out from the rest i think. neuf ca va? 9 |
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01/10/2007 11:52:33 AM |
Nice job! Self portraits are hard to get really crisp and sharp, but you have done an excellent job -- and you would have had a hard time finding a more handsome model :) Good luck! One of the strongest ones in this challenge in my opinion! |
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01/10/2007 05:40:42 AM |
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01/10/2007 01:50:01 AM |
I'm sure all the girls will give you high score, so I'll give you a low one to compensate :D (just kidding) |
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01/09/2007 09:15:32 PM |
Very, very nice shot. I like the way it's framed/composed. Great range of black and white. As I tell another friend who shoots baseball photos- "tack sharp". Superior image and I gave you a '10' and hope to see this finish in the top three. Congrats! |
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01/09/2007 08:24:23 PM |
looks over retouched, but the lines on the forehead really stand out since the rest of the skin looks fake. The key to retouching is that it should be subtle. This is not. I don't love the facial expression either, but I do recognize that the quality of the photo is lovely and the framing is wonderful. I wish people would not go so overboard with the clone and bandaid tool. If it was not done in photoshop was it neat image? Anyhow next time ease up a bit, people don't have perfect skin. 6 |
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01/09/2007 07:19:11 PM |
Nice lighting and good quality B&W treatment. I like the upward look and angled pose as well. |
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