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01/04/2007 08:28:53 AM |
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Hello from the Critique club, my name is Jon Rowe, and i will be looking at your image this evening :)
Composition/Lighting : the lighting in this image really seems to be great. you have the main light at the right angle, and the shadows on the opposite side are very nice, w/out losing detail. as i stated when voting, this image is incredibly too small. if it was tripled in size, more detail would have come through. i'm afraid that when an image is submitted this small, voters dont' waste their time and just vote it low b/c of the size. crystal left you a great link to a tutorial, if you use that in your next challenge, i believe you will have better luck w/ the voters.
Challenge : this is very humorous. if he's retired, i can see how this would fit the challenge. it shows his relaxing, and enjoying his time off after years of hard work. but, i have to guess if he's retired due to the lack of detail due to the small picture size
Conclusion : overall it's a very good image, that was lit very nicely. if this took full advantage of the pixel dimensions, i think this would have been a 5.5 - 6 image easily. good luck, and let me know if you have any questions about my critique.
Keep on shootin!
Good luck on your future challenges:)
-Jon Rowe |
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12/31/2006 02:56:41 PM |
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12/30/2006 09:32:45 PM |
| interesting idea but this submission needs to be bigger. Give us something to vote on! |
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12/30/2006 07:33:06 PM |
| Great idea.... where ARE the bon-bons? (Image is too small to find them). |
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12/29/2006 10:48:29 AM |
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12/28/2006 11:36:29 AM |
| hilarious shot. love the idea! I'm sure some people will find problems with the exposure on his face, but kudos on the creativity and the execution! Cheers |
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12/28/2006 02:04:11 AM |
| Welcome to the world of Peggy Bundy. Very creative. Needs to be bigger, though. |
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12/27/2006 07:14:04 PM |
| what occupation is this?????? |
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12/27/2006 08:06:31 AM |
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12/27/2006 06:25:22 AM |
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12/27/2006 12:07:16 AM |
| I would have liked this pic more if it were larger, and possibly landscape. |
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12/26/2006 10:16:18 PM |
way too small sorry.
looks cool though so ill give it a 6 |
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12/26/2006 08:26:34 PM |
| ity bity image. I like the concept, but I don't see bonbons and would have liked this a bit larger. |
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12/26/2006 06:58:27 PM |
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12/26/2006 05:38:19 AM |
| Little lite in the loafers too it appears. |
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12/25/2006 03:50:56 PM |
| LOL! Great pic, but I wish it was larger. |
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12/25/2006 02:30:01 PM |
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12/25/2006 01:12:04 PM |
| Should have been bigger. It looks like a great photo, but we lose out on the detail because it is so small. |
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12/25/2006 06:29:02 AM |
| no offense meant whatsoever, cause i'm sure you will read it from multiple people, but if you took full advantage of the 640 pixels on the long side, your score would increase by at least 1 - 2 points. way too small. great image though :D |
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12/25/2006 06:16:14 AM |
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12/24/2006 07:23:14 PM |
| too small to judge properly |
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