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12/29/2006 01:51:13 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: I'll echo what is already here...nothing looks focused. I do see that the label is focused, but your DOF gives the illusion that the total image is out of focus.
Lighting: Too harsh with a washed out background.
Composition/Content: The angle of your crop is uncomfortable.
My Opinion: Looking through your portfolio, there are some very strong, well-executed images there. You obviously know how the voters vote and you are very capable of producing strong images. I am at a loss trying to understand what you were after here.
Eric
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12/24/2006 07:48:01 AM |
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12/24/2006 03:21:30 AM |
| I found the subject to be uninteresting photographically. Also when doing such a close-up, you need to be sure that the image is tack sharp, which this one isn't. Your exposure is fine, but the angle also seems a bit unattractive. |
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12/23/2006 12:05:18 PM |
| would be better if the entire bottle was in focus - nice try |
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12/23/2006 11:29:26 AM |
| Would prefer that more DOF; the cap seems to have no detail and the top line of the label is fuzzy. |
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12/22/2006 01:21:58 PM |
| 90 degree left rotate doesn't work for me, nor does the focus. Although a good idea, another perspective would have made this work. |
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12/21/2006 06:48:15 PM |
| This is a tough subject to shoot since it has a black label and cap as well as reflective qualities. |
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12/19/2006 10:43:01 AM |
| Great product, but doesn't really work for the challenge. |
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12/18/2006 05:08:01 PM |
| The depth of field is low. |
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12/18/2006 01:24:37 PM |
| This is the opposite of sticky! |
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12/18/2006 04:42:21 AM |
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12/17/2006 11:39:50 PM |
| Oooh...I think the challenge needs that! |
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12/17/2006 09:03:53 PM |
| Mmm yes that is goo gone. Its not sticky, boring and ya.. dont like it. 1 |
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