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12/30/2006 11:59:21 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Very nice white balance choice, yielding great colors and strong tones. The bottom flower looks a little out of focus to me.
Lighting: The bottom flower is also just a bit overexposed. There are also some distraction hot spots on most of the thorns. Shooting at a different time of day might have helped this a bit.
Composition/Content: I like the flow you created with the angle of the vine. It serves well to pull the viewer's eye up and into the image. I think that the content is a bit lacking. While I fully understand your interpretation, it was apparently not what the voters were looking for.
My Opinion: I think that the voters had more of a messy liquid theme in mind. Even still, with a little sharper focus and a little less exposure, I think this capture would have finished much higher.
Eric
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12/24/2006 07:46:35 AM |
The thorns look to be in sharp focus, but I am bothered by the soft focus on the flowers. |
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12/22/2006 08:51:16 AM |
At first I didn't get it...then Googled it. Like the Poinsettia, "it exudes a sticky white sap from any cut surface"...But were's the cut surface? Nevermind, I wouldn't do that to my plant either. So, I put 2 and 2 together and appreciated your interpretation! |
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12/19/2006 07:56:52 PM |
Blooms on this plant are always fascinating. |
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12/19/2006 02:01:19 PM |
I believe the thorns are more sharp, than sticky |
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12/19/2006 08:56:10 AM |
where does sticky come into this, sorry cant see it |
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12/18/2006 02:24:11 PM |
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12/17/2006 11:59:11 PM |
Ouch is right...but great colours. |
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