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12/18/2006 07:28:05 AM |
Well I like the composition, and I think it is a valid entry for Dirt. I've seen enough dirt to fill in the blanks, and these tools create a lot of blanks. The broom for ________ (floor dirt and sand), The scrub brush for _________ (dirty fur or walls), the forks for _________ (animal dirt), the squeegees for _________ (dirty water and/or windows). Actually you got more dirt into your shot that anyone else in the challenge.
As I said in my earlier comment, I like the color. The red wall with the red broom , and the touch of red on the squeegee contribute a lot to the composition. If it were my shot, I think I might take out the red on the fork handle. |
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12/18/2006 03:14:29 AM |
I really thought this would have done a little better. I gave it a 6. I realize there is no actual dirt in this shot but they are impliments of dirt. Since you had advanced editing, I wonder if this would have looked better in B&W or sepia. Just a thought. |
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12/16/2006 11:35:16 AM |
There is no actua image of dirt in this photo. |
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12/16/2006 09:07:24 AM |
too much in the photo, try a photo with just one rake instead of everything |
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12/13/2006 06:13:56 PM |
show me the clumps of real dirt, spread it out, then use your tools to clean it up. oh, you don't have a shovel, I see (no shovel). |
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12/11/2006 03:17:33 PM |
I would have given this a very high score, if one just had some, just a little pile of compost or dirt somewhere. I really love this composition of this one..... |
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12/11/2006 01:49:54 PM |
Too static. A creative approach, but just doesn't have much appeal as a photograph outside of the challenge. 4 |
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12/11/2006 09:45:44 AM |
Good idea, and I like the simple color scheme. |
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12/11/2006 08:29:27 AM |
While it somewhat meets the challenge description, the overall composition is somewhat uninspired. The image itself is also a little soft on focus. |
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12/11/2006 12:32:14 AM |
Excellent concept. How abt some variety in placements. |
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12/10/2006 08:35:51 PM |
Hey, those two in the middle.... aren't they realy for road apples?! Fun image. |
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