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11/04/2003 08:15:35 PM |
*critique club*
I think that the earlier commentors have picked up on the main problems in this shot - the lack of clear focus on the flowers and the overall lack of sharpness.
I've looked at your profile and I really like your butterfly photos. You have brought out the colour there very well indeed. That fascination with colour is missing here. Also, the composition in your butterfly shots is interesting, with a nice placing of the main subjects. The composition here needs similar consideration, I feel.
Best wishes,
Jim
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11/02/2003 11:30:05 AM |
| Showing the backs of the flowers helps keep them from stealing the center of interest from their interesting shadows. Some sharpening would enhance the interesting textures of this image. |
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10/31/2003 03:37:12 PM |
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10/29/2003 06:44:01 AM |
| 7. Would prefer a clearer focus on the flower petals. |
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10/27/2003 04:15:35 PM |
| I like the shape of the shadows. Wish it were all sharper. |
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