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Afternoon Thunderstorms
Afternoon Thunderstorms
JuliBoc


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Black & White III (Advanced Editing V)
Camera: Panasonic DMC-FZ30
Location: Delray Beach, FL
Date: Nov 8, 2006
Aperture: 7.1
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/400
Galleries: Landscape, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Nov 9, 2006

Adjustment layers:
Saturation (-100)
Levels
Curves (with mask to lighten the trees on the right)
Contrast (+3)
Reduced noise
Resized
Smart Sharpen
Saved for web

Statistics
Place: 322 out of 424
Avg (all users): 5.1059
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
Avg (participants): 4.9537
Avg (non-participants): 5.3710
Views since voting: 799
Views during voting: 251
Votes: 170
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0


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11/22/2006 06:09:11 AM
Hi Julie. This composition is quite nice, but my eye wants something more. I'm guessing it's contrast.

I noticed you desaturated by using the saturation slider. Instead, try using the channel mixer. You'd be amazed at how different you can make the same scene by using different amounts of the red, green, and blue channels.

In case channels are new to you, they're B&W versions that use different levels of gray, from black to white, to show how much of each of red, green, and blue appear in the photo. So something that's bright red will appear almost white in the red channel, but almost black in the blue. Every color combines red, green, and blue in different amounts, and channels separate those levels out. If you're using Photoshop, you can see the "channels" tab in the same box as the layers. Turn each of them on one at a time to see how they work.

You can really emphasize different things. For example, these are both the same shot, using only the red channel or the blue channel:



For more help, check out this DPC tutorial on converting to B&W:

Message edited by author 2006-11-22 11:11:37.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/16/2006 06:33:41 AM
Beautiful sky and nice contrast with the trees. I wish there was more definition with the water and the bridge though. Maybe more shadows and highlights to realy define the ripples inthe water and the lights and darks of the bridge. It also looks like some of the area in front could have been highlighted a bit to give it more life and depth.
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11/14/2006 05:32:18 AM
Would like to see more detail in the dock. Highlights in sky are a bit overpowering.
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11/13/2006 05:28:51 AM
You just have to love that sky! :D I see that forming up and can't wait to grab my camera. Good job on controlling the whites and not blowing them out. The location you've taken this shot lends itself well to the overall feel and composition of this image. You can "feel" the breeze gusting on the water. The pier is abandoned (mostly) which aids in the "get out of here" mentally most people take with approaching storms (photographer's excluded of course). Then last, but not least, you have the interesting lines the pier adds, although as a leading line it keeps the viewer in the lower area of the photo and is minimal in helpful impact. There's probably much more that could be said about this photograph and the way it's put together. Could be a fun one to post to the forums after the challenge is over. :D Best of luck to you in the challenge.
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