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12/06/2006 03:23:19 PM |
Nice composition and color. I might've tried cloning out the horizontal band in the background. |
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12/06/2006 11:48:11 AM |
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12/03/2006 06:14:31 AM |
I'm suffering from border disorder. OUCH! I generally like a tasteful border but this one doesn't seem to being doing anything positive for the image. I really like the composition and the exposure is right on. I think the image could use more contrast to better accentuate those beautiful feathers again those curly leaves. Good Luck! |
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12/02/2006 12:26:37 AM |
Hi Shez. Nice composition and nice colours. |
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12/01/2006 07:14:24 AM |
Love the photo, not crazy about the border color |
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12/01/2006 01:23:44 AM |
I guess you already know the background competes with the main subject. Those white stems are way too bright and pull the eye away from the bird.
Frame the shot with a clean background and you woud do much better. |
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12/01/2006 12:11:43 AM |
that's a beautiful Australian Lorikeet alright!
Learnt a new bird today |
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11/30/2006 11:47:41 PM |
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11/30/2006 10:57:14 PM |
without the border would have been stronger, but will get the Aussie vote..7 |
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11/30/2006 10:30:41 PM |
The blue border is horrible - it weakens the impact of the blue in the image. Compositionally though, there is some interesting stuff here. There are three obvious elements to consider - the bird, the foliage, and the white lines - and those white lines are the most immediate impact here. They might have made a useful compositional element, had you, for instance used them to balance the bird in frame, but here - where they appear to be an unconsidered background element - they just annoy the eye. |
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11/30/2006 08:04:24 PM |
Kill the border, but I like the bird..... |
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