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10/22/2003 06:44:04 AM |
| It's a good composition. As with filiming food, the coloring is off though. |
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10/19/2003 04:36:42 PM |
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10/19/2003 02:03:29 PM |
| This compositoin is not inspiring me. It looks like you want the table surface to be the primary subject of this photo. |
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10/18/2003 05:23:17 PM |
| Looks very yummy. But the cropping leaves me wanting on this shot. There is too much space between the plates and tehe dirty fork, though indicting that a bit has been taken is really distracting in the end. The colors are wonderful, the lighting is nice and bright showing off your subjects so an 8 for this one. |
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10/17/2003 06:36:09 PM |
| The two plates are fighting for attention. Very distracting. The fork doesn't help the situation. |
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10/17/2003 03:54:34 PM |
| The fries look delicious, the pork chop looks suspicious. Imho showing more of the chop might have made it more appealing - and, again my own taste, I would have used a clean fork. |
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10/16/2003 08:20:21 PM |
| Seems like there is too much dead space between the fries and meat. |
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10/16/2003 03:20:06 PM |
| Very nice job on the placement of the plates. I like the in the corners like that. The lines on the placemat form nice diagonals. Looks like it might need a little USM. And a nitpick - the crumbs on the placemat are a little distracting. But, I can't talk much 'cuz I'm messy. :-) |
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10/16/2003 12:27:02 PM |
| Innovative composition. Just caught the rule of thirds. Gets a 9, though, only because I feel that you needed to bring the meat in just a tad closer. I think there is just a bit too much 'table' there and it nearly distracts. My opinion, of course |
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10/16/2003 10:02:33 AM |
| I like the arrangement of the foods, with the fork sort of 'bridging the gap' so to speak. However, I find the colors a bit off (makes the meat look a bit unappealing), perhaps the lighting? Or hue changes? Background is nice and uniform - maybe would've tried to move some of the crumbs and cover up that bit of wood with the plate at the bottom left. I bet the eating part was fun! 5 |
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10/16/2003 07:56:29 AM |
| interesting composition, the strong diagonals link the plates quite well - though maybe that small triangle of table could have been covered ? |
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10/16/2003 06:32:28 AM |
| This is the most suprising one of the lot. conceptual |
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10/16/2003 02:45:06 AM |
Good Points:creative thinking with teh composition
Bad Points: sadly it doesn't work for me, if the plates were closer this would be much better I feel. Also the food on the fork doesn't look pretty
Overall Score:3 |
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10/15/2003 09:00:22 PM |
| I would like to see more parts of the food and fork shouldn't be cut- 6 from me! |
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10/15/2003 08:55:25 PM |
| good try at "abstract dining" i have two suggestions: wipe the crumbs off the tablemat, and pull the same down a little so that you don't see the wood table. Those two things, imo, would have given you a higher score from the "stock photography group" here at dpc. Personally, that gets old for me. I like your impromptu creativity. I don't think theres a enough of it around here. Cool shot, nice work. 7. |
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10/15/2003 08:09:51 PM |
Just a personal prefrence.
I think it would've been better if the table/cloth and fork was clean.
otherwise I like the way its taken. |
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