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10/27/2003 10:22:30 AM |
Originally posted by Flash: 6. Another version might talk to me more. Perhaps a focused flashlight beam. Or sidelighted by a candle. |
I did actually use a candle. It's noted in the notes. |
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10/26/2003 06:02:49 PM |
I'm not sure exactly what kind of effect you are going for here, but this photo really doesn't do much for me.. |
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10/26/2003 02:33:14 PM |
6. Another version might talk to me more. Perhaps a focused flashlight beam. Or sidelighted by a candle. |
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10/22/2003 08:49:30 PM |
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10/22/2003 05:42:09 PM |
I hope you don't read in that light! :) Your poor eyes! Okay, just kidding but the light does seem rather dark for reading and if it was bumped up a notch it would really add to the shot for me. I like the subject matter you chose, very nice considering the recent breaking of some rule, even if by accident, myself being one of them! ;) My first impression was a 3 vote, after coming back and looking more closely I'm going to a 6 for now, may be back again. |
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10/20/2003 02:53:24 PM |
The focus is pretty good - I would've liked the first few lines in that first paragraph all to be in focus then start blending out. I wish the lighting was a bit brighter as well, BUT I do like the fact that it is lighting only a portion of the writing and tapers off. The subject/composition doesn't hold my attention very long - I find it a little dry, a little color to spice things up may have helped, maybe a red circle around 'read the rules' or something similar. Just an idea. All in all I gave it a 5 |
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