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11/07/2006 03:41:26 AM |
| I think that the un-ironed backdrop lets this shot down |
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11/05/2006 12:16:04 PM |
| Good lighting and colors, but the wrinkles in the muslin are a bit distracting. Placing the subjects a little farther in front of the backdrop may help that. Composition overall looks pretty good. |
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11/05/2006 06:41:05 AM |
| Nice...let's eat. A nicely set up still life. May tweak the lighting a little...tha's the hardest part. |
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11/05/2006 06:00:06 AM |
| the image as a whole feels a little soft. |
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11/04/2006 02:44:19 PM |
| Very nice still life here..... |
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11/04/2006 07:29:54 AM |
| Just looking at the image makes me hungry! I like the set up and color tones, I think ironing the sheet and getting a litlle sharper focus and better lighting on the label would have made this image score a little better. Good luck in the challenge. |
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11/03/2006 01:26:07 AM |
| Nice colors.First of all, let me say I am an amateur and relatively new to dpc, but if this doesn't score as you had hoped, here are some things you might consider. It is usually good to have an odd number of objects in a grouping. If you had only three, or added a fifth, and moved them to the right rather than having the group centered and almost bilateral it would be more pleasing to the eye. The soup and bread does look yummy! |
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11/02/2006 01:20:37 PM |
| My eye keeps going to the crumpled backdrop. I find it distracting. Also I think the lable and bread are a little too bright. Still it is a nice composition, and the highlights on the terracotta are good. IMHO |
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11/01/2006 10:46:35 PM |
| too soft, too many light reflections, too many wrinkles in the cloth |
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11/01/2006 06:18:09 PM |
| The image is sharp and has nice color however a few things are holding this back. First the lighting is a bit too harsh. I'd really try and diffuse it so that you get softer highlights. Second, the background is a distraction. The folds you have in them work well for this sort of shot just not the hard edge wrinkles. Lastly, the noise is an issue. This sort of shot needs to have a more classy feel and the noise just doesn't go with that. Perhaps that was just an ISO mistake? |
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11/01/2006 01:28:04 PM |
| Fun concept. The wrinkles in the cloth are distracting, though. It's too bad because you had some neat interplay going on with the light and shadows where the folds are. 5 |
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11/01/2006 11:30:11 AM |
| Excessive glow does not a wrinkle flatten. |
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11/01/2006 10:52:50 AM |
| focus good, but the lighting shows to much shadows. |
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11/01/2006 05:59:27 AM |
Mmmmmmmmmmm looks yummy... now I have to go to lunch!
Nice job of instilling emotion/desire into an image. |
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