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10/10/2006 01:32:55 PM |
| Colourful, bold composition. And funny. I have one compositional comment - the hand posture is not at all natural for someone lying in a bath - it looks like the bottle is being held for the photo, possibly even with the wrong hand. I would expect a hand to wrap around more. And a niggle - there's some jpeg noise on the feet. |
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10/10/2006 11:59:59 AM |
| A little too much backlighting makes the bottle hard to read. Great idea though. |
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10/09/2006 09:46:12 PM |
| Great idea and comp but the subject isn't exposed properly 5 |
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10/09/2006 01:16:46 PM |
| Nice idea. Some fill directly on the bottle would be lovely ... |
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10/09/2006 12:52:55 AM |
| I like the concept and composition of this - but pity that the main subject (which is the drink) is somewhat underexposed here. |
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10/08/2006 11:35:41 AM |
I like your idea of roughin' it :)
but I'd open the beer :) |
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10/08/2006 05:43:11 AM |
| the bottle (the subject) is underexposed, imo |
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10/07/2006 12:35:25 PM |
| Nice idea, nice title, wish there was more brightness and contrast to bring out the... beer? |
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10/07/2006 09:17:01 AM |
| only the light problem :s |
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10/06/2006 12:11:38 PM |
I think this could have been my winning shot - Just a couple of things that make it miss that though.
1. The tree stump competes far too much with the shape of the bottle
2. The bottle should have been lit much better - My eye tends to go to the brightness of the sky.
Great idea though |
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10/05/2006 10:39:25 PM |
This is an interesting take on the Corona ads, but there are some problems.
The label is too dark. The tree tops aren't prominent enough, they're just distractions and what is likely a lovely view, is all but invisible. |
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10/05/2006 08:35:19 PM |
| Nice job, but needs more light on the product. I like the compand concept But not the focus issues. |
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10/05/2006 07:03:45 PM |
| you should use flash on the bottle, would be very nice !! |
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10/05/2006 05:48:53 PM |
| The bottle is backlit and therefore hard to see what is being "advertised." Next time try flashing the bottle or having the sun behind you. |
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10/05/2006 03:54:13 PM |
| "When you can take it from me, Graasshopper, you will be missing five fingers!" ;) |
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10/05/2006 01:58:53 PM |
| Tough shot, trying to display the bottle while not blowing out the sky. Should have used a refelector of some sort to bounce some light back onto that label because it is just about too dark to read - not a good thing for an advertisement. Idea here is nice, composition is good. Good luck. |
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10/05/2006 11:04:28 AM |
| Can't see the label, so not very good as an advert. |
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10/05/2006 08:27:12 AM |
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10/04/2006 04:49:41 PM |
| Nice idea. Bottle needs a little more illumination to bring out product. |
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10/04/2006 01:08:10 PM |
| The concept is cool. Wish I could read the label on the bottle, though. |
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10/04/2006 12:38:17 PM |
| Should have some reflecting light to get more attention on the beer. The dead tree in the background is very distracting and something red under her feet. Always watch your backgrounds. |
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10/04/2006 11:02:32 AM |
Ah! A beer in the bathtub--nothing better!
In my opinion, it's hard to see the detail on the bottle's label. This is almost a silhoutte image. |
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10/04/2006 10:18:17 AM |
| I can't see the drink very clearly. |
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10/04/2006 08:48:48 AM |
| I think you needed so fill in light on the bottle. Can't read the label. |
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10/04/2006 06:49:28 AM |
| nice but it needs some light on the face of the bottle |
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10/04/2006 03:42:14 AM |
| This would be a better shot if the bottle was lit up to show the logo. Not a bad idea though. |
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10/03/2006 09:04:30 PM |
| Great concept. The lighting on the lable is too dark, making it hard to read. I love the "idea" of it though. |
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