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Ann
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Camera: Nikon D200
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D
Location: New Haven, Connecticut
Date: Sep 16, 2006
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100s
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Sep 30, 2006

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 Ann, in her suit for competition.

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 09/30/2006 04:21:45 PM
I like her head tilted up and the angle, but I wish her eyes weren't looking up quite so much. She has pretty brown eyes and there is too much of the whites with the way she is looking. I like all the diagonal leading lines. Even the bench line doesn't bother me too much, although it is a good thing to watch out for things cutting through heads. Your color and skin tone is very nice. The whites of her blouse look a little hot on my monitor. Very nice shot.
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 09/30/2006 04:19:09 PM
I'm not going to commetn on the PP...

The park bench behind her is not a problem as someone else said. It is a well composed shot. However, the eyeballs are too high. Generally you don't want an extreme ammount of white underneath or above the eyeball - it looks too stressed.

It is a very clean portrait overall, great job.
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 09/30/2006 04:13:24 PM
good pic, would prefer that the back of the bench did not bisect her head, watch your backgrounds, they can say subliminal things to those not paying attention.
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 09/30/2006 04:09:01 PM
Originally posted by saintaugust:
maybe play with levels/contast/saturation?


Was definitely thinking a curve boost would help...

Search the forums for s-curve.
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 09/30/2006 03:02:59 PM
pretty girl, looks a bit like katie holmes.

but the image itself looks a bit 'flat'.. lacks punch... maybe play with levels/contast/saturation?
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