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10/09/2006 03:36:38 AM |
The problem with abstract at DPC is that it doesn't please everyone and it usually gets voted down when "we" don't get it.
but... "Hello... This is an abstract!"
I feel that.. don't let the score bother you.. I felt that it should have been at least a 5.. so.. hang in there.
Technically, there could be a few improvements.
1) the lighting to show less of the whites
2) too much spaces work against abstracts. Zoom in and give it a really nice tight crop..
Hope this helps.. |
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10/06/2006 12:49:43 PM |
The technicals: I think a big part of your issue is actually the halogen lamp. They give off such a shifted color that sometimes it's hard to work with, especially when you are going for purple (cool) rather than yellow (warm). What happens in PP is you get pixelation and saturation problems in the highlights like you see here. There are also noise issues, which seem to be a no-no on DPC.
The feel: nicely abstract. I may have included more of the paper towel and less negative space along the bottom.
The game: abstracts always have a tough time outside abstract challenges here on DPC. |
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09/29/2006 12:28:28 PM |
Meets the challenge. A hard image for me to look at though. Bit too abstract for me. |
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09/29/2006 06:28:17 AM |
Interesting. Not sure what it is, but interesting. I think there is too much negative space to be effective... |
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09/29/2006 02:13:10 AM |
Boa foto. a parte do liquido está com algum ruido e é pena o canto superior esquerdo aparecer desfocado, dado que é para onde o olhar é atraido. 5 p |
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09/28/2006 05:56:56 PM |
Interesting concept. I would attempt increasing DoF and sharpening to make the detail stands up. |
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09/28/2006 05:43:50 PM |
i can't figure out what this is... |
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09/27/2006 08:14:20 AM |
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