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09/22/2006 09:02:10 AM |
Critique Club Review:
Great Photo!
Wasn't sure if your title as satire or an error. How can an object be closer than it is? (Different universe than the one I'm used to?) Still thast has little influence on the picture itself, and we know what you meant.
This challenge is tough to call. Because the aim is a tribue to Gary Larson, so many of the photos are highly manipulated.
I like the shallow depth of field here. It is spot on. The model is soft so as not to compete witht the eye. The door fades to softness so as not to distract the viewer from the eye.
There is a little too much negative space for my taste. But not bad. About the only thing I can think of that I would have liked to see, was if you could have done the eye in color.
As is, this is an excellent photo. Personally, given the level of manipulation that was allowed, I think you should have scored much higher. I hindsight I think others may come to agree, this was a very good representation of Larson, with a minumum of processing. I liked the challenge, I like the pictures, I do feel though that the levels of manipulation allowed turned the challenge into a drawing contest for some people.
Based on pure photo qualitied, and not graphic artist renderings, I think you should have been in the hunt for a ribbon.
Congratulations on your top 40 finish.
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09/21/2006 08:27:06 AM |
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09/20/2006 03:22:23 PM |
Returning for comments:
Lol. Very well put together. |
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09/18/2006 07:16:53 PM |
| Third one I have seen like this, and unfortunately this one is my least favorite. A good picture, and nicely done, just not my favorite. |
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09/15/2006 05:54:53 PM |
| Objects in mirror are closer than they appear... worded wrong but still a great choice. One of my all time favorite Far Sides. |
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09/15/2006 08:34:01 AM |
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09/15/2006 04:19:22 AM |
Oh freaking heck that's scary!! Not sure exactly why but, eeeeee!
I obviously think the photo is very visually compelling - maybe would have prefered more of the figure to the left to be in focus but overall the shot works. I like the choice of black and white. |
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09/15/2006 12:52:23 AM |
| overall too soft. Doesn't it have to say "Objects in mirror are closer than they appear"? |
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09/14/2006 09:18:58 PM |
| Spot on! I love this strip and your recreation is excellent. |
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09/14/2006 08:27:31 PM |
| I think this is the best of these shots. The eye looks great. 8 |
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09/14/2006 08:21:33 PM |
| hehe great work best of the other 2 Ive seen but sshhh dont tell them that lol |
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09/14/2006 08:17:05 PM |
| Your title's reversed! Think you meant they're closer than they appear. Not marking off - that eye is terrific. |
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