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01/24/2007 04:40:28 PM |
| For this to be more effective, I would have liked the whole set of keys in focus and clear. Personally, I like keyboard shots that are pulled back just a bit more than this one. I love the simplicity of a black and white keyboard, though. I agree that it's a very photogenic instrument and one I've always wanted to play. I play the guitar, which does have the benefit of being much more portable! :) |
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10/09/2006 03:45:21 AM |
Simple and effective.
I love this shot.
A pity you don't have the use of an external flash. it'll work wonders.
I noticed that you're shooting:
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/54 sec
Try to do an aperture-priority and close the aperture to around 9... and see what you'll get. Remember to use a tripod. |
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09/26/2006 12:10:59 PM |
Critique Club Review:
Either focus or depth of field is a little off. A smaller f-stop would have helped a lot here.
Lighting is dramatic. But the first black key doesn't show enough detail for me. I noticed one person was troubled by the reflection in the second key. To me it gices some reference for the shape of the key face.
Overall I like the picture. The composition is good, the whites are nice and white. It's the focus issue I notice the most. |
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09/16/2006 11:35:13 AM |
| the harsh shadows detract from this otherwise strong graphic image |
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09/15/2006 11:09:06 PM |
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09/14/2006 09:02:40 AM |
| Wow, now that's a closeup! Love the angles...great work! |
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09/14/2006 06:59:00 AM |
| A play on words more than visuals, me thinks. |
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09/13/2006 06:49:09 PM |
| Nice work, but I think the idea doesn't totally mesh with the theme. I still think the photo is very nice though! One of the best piano pieces I've seen in a while! |
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09/13/2006 05:01:18 PM |
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09/13/2006 04:30:51 PM |
| clean looking and nicely done... |
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09/13/2006 10:05:40 AM |
| Lighting might be a bit harsh, the shadows are not appealing. I'd also like to see a deeper DOF so that both keys are in focus. |
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09/13/2006 10:03:53 AM |
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09/12/2006 08:41:56 PM |
| What's that blue reflection on the right black key? |
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