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09/26/2006 01:58:00 PM |
Thoughts from Ecce, with his critique club hat on
Hi Nick and congratulations on your (current) highest scoring shot!
Composition
My only thought for improving the composition would have been a slightly lower angle without adding sky to the shot for a little more impact? as is however, for me the composition is just about perfect.
Technique
Its basic editing so you can't do much. I'm guessing the sky was really bad and levels/curves made it white? helps make the shot look cleaner.
Aesthetics, Challenge effectiveness
Even though (as you say) conditions were not right I'm wondering if you could have boosted the colours a little more? Does it fit the challenge? certainly, and better than many imho. This is a prime example of 'fitting the challenge' helps ones score more than a technically better picture being shoehorned into a challenge, its not a truly 'WOW' shot but perfect for the challenge. A great find and I'm left wondering how workers manage with a coffee cup on their desks? |
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09/18/2006 04:00:51 PM |
| Is that in Utah? I've seen one just like it! |
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09/17/2006 06:09:46 PM |
| I wonder if that helps keep the employees inside... hmmmm! Nice image, great subject. 7 |
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09/17/2006 02:56:41 PM |
| unique and interesting. good DOF |
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09/17/2006 01:59:13 PM |
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09/17/2006 01:51:43 PM |
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09/17/2006 12:25:48 AM |
| Funny title, nice find - well done. |
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09/15/2006 07:48:36 PM |
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09/15/2006 03:29:16 AM |
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09/14/2006 09:00:47 AM |
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09/13/2006 04:53:03 PM |
| Love the title and it meets the challenge well. |
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09/13/2006 04:33:15 PM |
| Modern version of the Pise tower ? |
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09/13/2006 10:03:34 AM |
| Haha!! That's too funny and your title is perfect! |
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09/13/2006 07:02:11 AM |
| great idea but it would have been great if there were clouds or the light was on the face of the building |
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09/13/2006 05:56:45 AM |
| My friend works in this building... I'm meeting him for lunch in an hour! I'll be curious to see what other DPC'er is in the greater Warrendale/Cranberry metroplex area :) |
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09/12/2006 08:29:50 PM |
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