Author | Thread |
|
10/13/2006 08:57:12 AM |
Greets from the Critique Club
This could be a very deep and emotive piece with a bit better lighting. I think if you had set some lighting off to the left side of the model, the shadows would help.
I think the editing on this works pretty well, as does the expression.
I do find myself drawn more to the door than the person for some reason. I think that it may be sharper or more in focus, or maybe it just interests my eye more.
This is a good photo and I think a bit of shadows would have thrown this over the top.
--Mike |
|
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
10/07/2006 06:28:54 AM |
My guess that you will get a lot of comments about the title!
H... thought ...
or
Did you .... think ....
Seems that the background is in better focus than the person. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
10/07/2006 05:53:49 AM |
Love the colors of this. Great facial expression, too. I think I would have cloned out the gate handle as it distracts a bit. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
10/01/2006 05:43:10 PM |
Interesting... play with the lighting a bit to add shadows in a way that amplifies the expression on the subject and desired feeling. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
10/01/2006 03:43:24 PM |
I dont care much for the pose, the lighting is all right. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
10/01/2006 01:59:58 PM |
the door handle is nearly lost in this, and yet, I find it to be the most interesting element. I wonder if a bit of dodge work could bring it out a bit more. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
10/01/2006 06:14:33 AM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
10/01/2006 05:25:06 AM |
Introspective. Interesting rustic setting. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/07/2025 08:01:20 PM EDT.