Critique Club Review:
Cool picture!
This is definetly a shot where the sum is greater than the total of the parts. Two worked definetly better than one, and I think three or more would have been a less pleasing composition.
Saturation, color, lighting, hues, compositon, are all very good.
I'm not sure there is anyplace else in the frame you could put the bubbles and look better. Yes, they are a bit centered. But given the two, and the size needed to appreciate the detail in the reflections, this is about what you had to do.
I would suggest darkening the light highlight to the left of the frame. It does distract from the bubbles a bit, and would be allowable under advanced edtiting rules. Also the background behind the right bubble goes a bit dark to be that big.
All in all, I lke this picture a lot! Very creative!
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