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09/02/2006 05:58:04 AM |
| Wow this is perfect! Well if it were't for the piercing that is. Why the hell do kids these days feel the need to mutilate themselves? Hello? you're beautiful! Stop messing with perfection! |
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08/28/2006 03:57:51 PM |
This is a great shot, and your model is beautiful. The smile is perfect, and I really like the eye brow ring. The lighting works well for this bright picture.
My only problem is the back eye is out of focus. |
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08/26/2006 07:05:15 PM |
Hope you don't mind me picking on this a bit, but you did ask for advice.
First I picked this images because I think the lighting is very well done. Nice catch lights in her eyes. The hairlight is not overpowering. There is a decent depth to the shadows.
I do think there are a couple of things you could do to help with the pose:
- the right arm reaching back widens her where she does not need to be wider.
- the top of her right arm being so far forward hides her neck and the top of her chest. A little more open here would have added depth to the image.
- i believe her left arm was up and positioned behind her head. Her arm showing in front of her neck widens her again and leaves we wondering what happened to her arm.
These aren't major problem, but once you reach this level the details really start to count. |
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08/26/2006 09:44:22 AM |
| I like this one a lot. The lighting is perfect. Beautiful girl. |
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08/26/2006 06:19:42 AM |
| Really like this shot. Beautiful eyes (nice catch lights) and a great smile. |
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08/25/2006 09:43:06 PM |
| I really like the soft lighting and her smile. Personally, I would crop this into a portrait orientation, cropping right at the top of the red dress (cropping out all the red) and then cropping in closer on the sides. |
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