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09/12/2006 08:58:22 PM |
Critique Club Review:
I took me a bit, and a read of your comments to figure out what was going on. I was guessing part of an old glass bowl, or remnants of a jellyfish. Had there been a bit of motion blur, it would have been easier to understand what was going on. Makes for a very interesting photo though.
Focus and depth of field are very good. The bird is nice and sharp, and the softness in the foreground and background, do a good job of focusing the attention on the subject. Exposure, color, and contrast are done well. You have managed to keep the detail in the white feathers of the bird, with out looking grey or dingy. I really like that you got down to the bird's level for this shot. All too often cameras never leave the eye level of their owners.
With the spray of water in front of the bird, with such a static capture, it hides the bird a bit, and may be why you lost some points. Perhaps a different angle, or a bit of a motion blur, would better tell the story. As is, it is still a pleasing photo.
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09/07/2006 05:07:40 PM |
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09/07/2006 11:57:21 AM |
Very nice action shot. Great Capture. Just needs to bump the colour up more for extra POP! |
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09/06/2006 04:03:50 PM |
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09/03/2006 05:46:57 AM |
That dead jellyfish / bag / whatever really takes away from this image. A great capture nonetheless. Looks like you had the big gun out. Thanks for sharing. |
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09/02/2006 04:55:14 PM |
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09/02/2006 09:23:06 AM |
While you did a good jopb at stopping the water it covers much of the head and looks strange to me. |
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09/02/2006 06:30:51 AM |
Good DOF but i can't tell what it is resting it's head on. It's head is a little dark, maybe you could of dodged that to make it clearer. |
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09/02/2006 04:48:23 AM |
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09/01/2006 04:18:48 PM |
Pretty bird and interesting reflections. I can't see his face to 'connect' with him, so I wish I knew what it is that he has his head stuck in. Is it a washed up fish? |
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08/31/2006 08:43:06 PM |
wow, that looks so different and interesting...love the still water against what the bird is doing with the water |
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