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09/02/2006 10:20:22 AM |
Critique Club Review:
A picture like this is hard to do, and you have a good foundation here. Things that come to mind are, that with the stretched fabric you have blocked the horizon, and created a new one. Unfortuantely since her arms are not exactly level it creates the illusion that the camera is tilted. The eye tends to slide down the new "horizon" and off to the left of the picture. A shorter depth of field would help focus the attention on the angel, the detail in the background competes a bit. Lastly soft focus or soft lighting would help a bit here also. Angels are mystical creatures, and the lighting here is very direct, almost harsh. Good control of the exposure and contrast. Nothing is burned out or muddied. |
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08/27/2006 07:31:16 PM |
| ONe nitpic... The tree near the horizon on the RH side. seems to interupt the flow of her arms IMHO. |
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08/23/2006 08:03:58 PM |
It's an interesting shot, and I like the lighting and composition.
But I don't see how it meets the challenge, and even your title doesn't help. 4. |
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08/23/2006 03:40:06 PM |
| Moderate on the M&M feel. Composition is nice. Lighting is a bit overexposed, but just a bit. 5 |
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08/22/2006 05:50:16 PM |
I like the general mood and lighting of the shot but I think you could improve the position of the model's head. I think it might be better if her face was pointed slightly more to the light and her chin was up elongate her neck.
But then again... what do I know. It's taken me >5 minutes to complete this comment because I continue to be drawn back to the shot. So there's something captivating just as it is. Nice job! |
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08/21/2006 05:24:51 PM |
| Something about he facial expression that I'm not sure about. |
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08/20/2006 10:40:13 PM |
| lovely composition and nice light for this shot |
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08/20/2006 10:16:52 PM |
| Shame the wind wasn't blowing a bit more, would have realy made tis shot...7 |
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