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08/22/2006 03:37:46 AM |
Hello from the Critique Club.
I like your subject choice for this challenge and gave you a 6 on this image because I thought the subject met the challenge and you executed your idea well. The only suggestion I have to improve this image is to try using a square crop to eliminate some of the dead space at the top of the image. As presented, the section of tree branch without any fruit and the section of sky without clouds at the top of the photo act as negative space with no real purpose. I would suggest cropping the top of the image down to just below the node where the branch holding the top pear meets the main branch. Give it a try and see how this changes the balance of the image.
PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.
Tim
Message edited by author 2006-08-22 07:40:35. |
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08/11/2006 12:09:18 PM |
0-2 Meets Challenge: 2
0-2 Creativity: 2
0-2 Technical Merit: 2
0-2 Visual Appeal: 1
0-1 Presentation: 1
0-1 Biased WOW Factor: 0 |
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08/09/2006 04:28:29 AM |
| I like the suspension it has...like they are hanging in mid-air. |
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