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08/06/2006 05:54:10 PM |
Lines are zen? To me, they distract from your statement about balance. |
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08/06/2006 12:02:29 PM |
I like what you were going for here. Balance I think is definitely an aspect of a zen image. I like the composition for the most part, though the white line is a bit distracting and to me throws off the balance of the image compositionally. The lighting is a bit bright, but you can't really do much about that during a competition! I would have liked to see the fellow from a slightly different vantage point, so you are more aligned with him horizontally, err so his body kind of makes a parallel to the horizon in the image (if that makes sense?) I think this would really highlight the form of his body. I could definately feel a zen-vibe from this but as I mentioned earlier the white line really jars me. I gave a 4 |
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08/05/2006 01:00:44 PM |
I like that the one ankle is wrapped. It shows how balance can lift a person above the pain. The blue mat makes it look like he is on a tightrope but when I look at his foot, it's not on one of the lines. Sort of disorienting, good thing the white line is there to ground everything. |
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08/03/2006 02:44:52 PM |
Nice composition and the blue B/G works well with the subject. |
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08/03/2006 05:18:52 AM |
do not look to the future
for your blue. 5 |
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07/30/2006 10:02:09 PM |
This is very still, yet, it is still busy, as the eye is drawn into the details of the person, and the lines interrupt it's serenity. |
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