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Challenge: On the Beach (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Olympus D-535 Zoom
Location: santa monica beach
Date: Jul 16, 2006
Date Uploaded: Jul 17, 2006

Not the greatest image, but I'm happy with how it turned out.

Statistics
Place: 249 out of 326
Avg (all users): 4.8414
Avg (commenters): 5.3571
Avg (participants): 4.7900
Avg (non-participants): 4.8684
Views since voting: 678
Views during voting: 362
Votes: 290
Comments: 15
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/25/2006 10:35:40 AM
Great job! The colors do seem to be a bit washed out, needing some processing to saturate it a bit more. Just a bit. I also think that I'd remove the people, and just leave the umbrellas, but that's for advanced editing. The horizon doesn't seem to be very straight in this either, tipping a bit to the right. I do like the shot, and you met the challenge's theme perfectly. I just can't score it as highly as I'd like.
07/25/2006 06:39:17 AM
a little bit on the gray or muddy side. i guess because it was overcast. the subject matter, to me, calls for brighter light. seems sad and dreary. maybe a different title would have changed the comment.
07/24/2006 07:38:22 PM
Very good composition. I think it is a bit flat. Did you try photoshop levels, curves, and hue/saturation? Would make this an excellent photo. 6
07/24/2006 12:03:21 PM
Contrast low and the horizon not level. The subject does not stand out enough. I wish you well in the challenge.
07/23/2006 04:04:43 AM
Great shot but a little bump in color saturation would have really made this pop
07/22/2006 11:01:38 AM
Great line-up, wish this was brighter.
07/20/2006 05:16:56 PM
interesting composition. 5 umbrellas amybe could have increased the saturation to intensify the colors, Dont you hate the trashcans?
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07/20/2006 01:28:13 PM
I'd like to see this with the colours bumped up a bit
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07/19/2006 01:06:33 PM
I like the composition, framing. colors are a little flat. 6
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07/19/2006 09:29:05 AM
a little dark... but nice
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07/19/2006 06:00:33 AM
Soft. Sweet, but soft. And you tilted the horizon . . .
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07/19/2006 02:02:03 AM
Would it be possible to brighten this up just a bit?
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07/19/2006 01:54:34 AM
perhaps a little bump in contrast may of helped?
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07/19/2006 01:06:48 AM
Shame you didn't fix the dull colours. This could have been so good.
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07/18/2006 10:42:45 PM
I like the toned down colors in this shot.... evokes an old fashioned photo.
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