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07/11/2006 01:31:15 PM |
A little too busy. I can't tell whether I should look at the book, the plane, the piece on the left, or the jumble at the top. All of the colors and shapes draw my attention.
Try to pick one subject and get rid of everything that doesn't focus attention on it. |
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07/11/2006 04:51:46 AM |
Oragami paper is not stationery. Good photo of oragami paper and instruction book though. |
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07/08/2006 06:36:00 PM |
Overall, focus seems a little soft. |
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07/07/2006 05:14:51 AM |
This looks like my daughter's room. The futility of the discard pile is enhanced by the simple nature of the final product. Nice job. |
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07/06/2006 08:07:52 PM |
nice thought. maybe w/o the instruction book? |
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07/06/2006 03:58:11 PM |
A closer shot of the book would improve this. Not enough detail at this distance. |
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07/06/2006 02:29:06 AM |
Rut Roh...I use to do origami..loved it! |
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07/05/2006 03:00:50 PM |
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07/05/2006 12:47:23 PM |
Good composition and color. |
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