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07/15/2006 08:08:36 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club Viranod!
I'd call this an extremely creative shot. The placement of the subject is nice and the half heart shadow was a great idea.
As was mentioned, the reflection is s huge distraction. Once a voter sees that it's hard for them to get away from it. The rocks coming to an abrupt end on the left leaves a sense of unfinishedness. Personally, I feel that if the reflection wasn't there and the rocks were the entire background, you'd have finished pretty high. The idea itself was excellent and, as I said, very creative. Just a couple of minor distractions cost you a few points.
Thanls for the opporrtunity to critique this image Viranod.
Cheers - Phil |
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07/08/2006 08:18:42 PM |
| Not doing anything for me and I felt compelled to figure out if you made a mistake and captured yourself in the reflection. I can't quite make out what or who it is which only frustrates me (LOL). |
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07/07/2006 11:04:18 AM |
| The composition is good, I like the creative angle, and the rule of thirds works well for this image. I'm unsure about the reflection in the vase, I'm guessing it was intentional, but I feel it doesn't really add anything at all to the image. Image seems reasonbly sharp and looks quite good from straight off the camera. 5 |
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07/07/2006 11:00:10 AM |
| title showed what you were trying for, would have been a better illution to have the white rocks on the left hand side too. (take a picture of rocks and then use it against the wall) that or just have the jug moved over... |
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07/06/2006 02:37:44 PM |
| Ohhhh I get it. Nice idea. Picture is a little flat, though. |
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07/04/2006 04:39:00 AM |
| I can see your reflections but good tones and angle. |
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07/03/2006 09:28:58 AM |
| Interesting observation. I can see the photographer's reflection in the pottery which is a bit distracting. Ultimately, the heart shape isn't enough to hold my interest. |
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07/03/2006 03:36:34 AM |
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