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07/11/2006 01:55:49 PM |
Beautiful shapes.
But not sharp enough, and not enough contrast. Try it against a black background. |
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07/11/2006 04:42:08 AM |
Nice composition and lighting. Very graceful and simple overall. |
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07/10/2006 09:34:31 AM |
I would have liked to see more contrast. |
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07/10/2006 08:58:27 AM |
Nice, imo could use a bit more contrast so the shadows on the paper jump out more but overall really nice |
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07/09/2006 06:00:22 PM |
Image is a little flat like the idea. |
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07/07/2006 01:39:38 PM |
i really like the way the paper looks here but something in the pencil bothers me... is this converted to blk & white by any chance?
perhaps without the pencil it would have been better because its somewhat imposing on something delicate and ruins the vibe , IMO. still nice though. |
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07/07/2006 01:17:48 PM |
nice idea and choice of coloring. |
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07/07/2006 11:19:02 AM |
The paper looks like the Sydney Opera House ;-) Overall, nice shot, good contrast between the paper and pencil, although there could be stronger contrast between the paper and bg. |
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07/07/2006 05:29:29 AM |
This image really needs to be a bit more high key to make it work. The lines are very pleasing but I do not fully understand why the pencil is there. |
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07/06/2006 04:45:51 PM |
Nice idea, but the lighting is much too flat. |
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07/06/2006 02:09:19 AM |
Nice idea and clean image. |
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07/05/2006 06:12:50 PM |
Nice but could use some contrast perhaps? |
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07/05/2006 05:15:13 PM |
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07/05/2006 04:25:30 PM |
A great composition. Maybe needs just slightly better focus, and some more emphatic contrast in the paper. |
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07/05/2006 03:03:03 PM |
Very simplistic and creative
I however tend to lose the paper against the white background. |
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07/05/2006 11:20:49 AM |
interesting...obscure, but interesting |
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07/05/2006 09:27:26 AM |
Would like to have seen this a little sharper, nice composition |
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07/05/2006 05:04:58 AM |
Well lit but I can't help thinking that adding at least one color may have made more of an impact. 7 |
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07/05/2006 03:29:25 AM |
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07/05/2006 01:06:37 AM |
Just needs a darker background IMO. |
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