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Beyond Understanding
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Challenge: Desolation II (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Location: Front porch
Date: Jun 18, 2006
Aperture: f/4.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100
Galleries: Emotive, Self Portrait
Date Uploaded: Jun 18, 2006

My artistic attempt at showing, illustrating, or personalizing "what desolation means to me." Desolate. Left out. Unhappy. Unwanted.

The black has purpose here, even though this turned out NOTHING like my "vision".

PSD file is available. Editing steps really unknown, except for the fact that no selections were made. There is a high pass filter, some alternate blending modes, and a USM for contrast. Some adjustment also done in Canon DPP prior to RAW conversion.

Not intended at all to be a "pretty" image. Fully expected to crash and burn and lower my average to an all time low.

Hope you enjoy :)

File name
CRW_6186.CRW
Camera Model Name
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL
Shooting Date/Time
6/18/2006 16:36:06
Tv(Shutter Speed)
1/400Sec.
Av(Aperture Value)
F4.5
Metering Modes
Evaluative metering
Exposure Compensation
0
ISO Speed
100
Lens
18-55mm
Focal Length
18.0 mm
Image size
3072 x 2048
Image Quality
RAW
Flash
Off
White Balance
Auto
AF mode
AI focus AF
Picture Style
-
Parameters
Tone Curve : -
Sharpness level : -
Pattern Sharpness : -
Contrast : 1
Sharpness : 1
Color saturation : 1
Color tone : 0
Color matrix
-
Color Space
sRGB
File Size
6024 KB
Drive Mode
Shooting with self-timer
Owner's Name
Bernard Shuford
Camera Body No.
0560150116

Statistics
Place: 188 out of 197
Avg (all users): 4.4262
Avg (commenters): 4.4545
Avg (participants): 4.3253
Avg (non-participants): 4.5100
Views since voting: 765
Views during voting: 303
Votes: 183
Comments: 17
Favorites: 0


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07/09/2006 02:40:10 PM
sorry for lateness

I'm not sure what I think about this one. I think that if I can across it in the challenge I wouldn't have voted it terribly well, but looking at it now I'm beginning to like it a lot more.

The high contrast does play a role I believe, even if it put me off to start with - not sure how to describe it but it does gice a kind of lost, desolate, not-sure-whats-going-on-with-your-life feel to it, which I think is what you were aiming for

I still think the processing went a bit too far though, but it certainly made me think
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07/02/2006 07:05:20 PM
hello again,

i was unable to enjoy the processing of this one. the concept seemed good enough which kept you from getting a lower score from me... but i did not like the processing at all. i could not understand the point of it, how it pertained to this particular shot.
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07/02/2006 04:18:10 AM
Trading Post

This one is too processed for my taste especially the leaves in the background. I am not sure I get the point of the shot...looks like he is just hanging out on the deck, so I am afraid I don't see the "desolation". The black area lacks definition so I can't tell what it is. The culmination of all of this is that I really can't quite figure this one out, I am sorry to say. I didn't vote in this challenge, because I was out of town. It's probably just as well as I wouldn't have helped your score any given my inability to figure it out and the extent of the PP. lol.
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06/29/2006 08:27:55 PM
Trading Post - I must say that I didnt get this one during challenge and I still struggle a bit now. I could tell that you were shooting for something but wasnt quite sure what. The processing was over the top and made it a bit hard to look at. So what is the purpose of the black?
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06/27/2006 02:05:48 PM
Trading post...
I gave you a 5 in voting on this. It seems to suffer from over processing. I think if you had taken this a little later in the day, more towards twilight it would have gone over better. Don't get me wrong, I'm not against the overprocessing (as you've seen and will see again with my glass challenge), hence the 5, but sometimes it just doesn't seem to fit with the voters.
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06/26/2006 04:46:22 PM
Trading Post comment

First, I've gotta say I love reading your comments on your photographs. I commented on this during the challenge - like the idea and the composition but am not thrilled with the processing. That said, without the processing I suspect it wouldn't have been as interesting a picture, because it is interesting - makes you stop and look. I think you came pretty close to achieving what you set out to do, and that's a good thing!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/25/2006 10:47:06 AM
the prosessing, while intreging, is a little much for me.
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06/24/2006 01:45:14 PM
Composition overall is interesting but I don't particularly like the post processing.
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06/23/2006 02:25:25 AM
Good idea but I am not sure about the processing.
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06/22/2006 10:04:14 PM
Colors just a little too saturated to fit with the image.
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06/22/2006 07:47:08 PM
While it is possible that the image could be interpreted as conveying a sense of "Desolation"... it could also be representative of the results of a Friday Night "Binge".

The harshness of the lighting would seem to suggest that the image was taken at High Noon, and the dark shadows at the bottom portion of the image effectively obliterate any definition that may have existed.

Keep shooting... practice it is said ... makes perfect.
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06/20/2006 04:47:05 AM
I think it's overprocessed
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06/19/2006 10:51:35 PM
seems to be overprocessed to the point of losing detail
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06/19/2006 09:19:50 PM
Washed out highlights and oversaturated.
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06/19/2006 08:22:24 PM
cool high contrast
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06/19/2006 05:36:50 PM
Umm not to fond of the high contrast on this maybe it would of worked a lil better in B&W?
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06/19/2006 12:05:18 PM
I can't decide if I like the grunge or not... but it's certainly noticable, which is why I'm mentioning it :-) The black shadow is a little distracting for me, but I think it's a great pose and camera angle. The bars might even give a feeling of imprisonment if the tops of the railing were not in the scene.
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