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07/01/2006 02:12:55 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
What a wonderful shot. Such emotion and such wonderful composition. I love the B&W treatment as well.
The first thing I did think when I saw it was someone's little girl after she was done playing and they caught her rubbing her eyes, perfect! Then I read your comments and I was close! ;) I use my children a lot as well.
I love the feel of this shot, the dirty little girl, the feeling of being alone and lost, the dirty dress everything. The only things that give me just a touch of concern are one, the focus. Could be just a touch, a tiny smidge sharper to really bring out the edges of the shot and two the lack of definate black/white spots, it seems to be a lot of gray, and some of them are really blending. Either adjusting the levels just a touch or adding a bit of brightness/contrast to make it pop just a touch more would really put this one over the top for me. I didn't get a chance to vote in this challenge, but if I had this would have gotten a 7 or 8 from me, with the adjustments a 9 or 10.
If you take my suggestions and rework this shot I would love to see the results.
Good luck in future challenges and I hope my comments help.
Deannda |
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06/25/2006 08:37:05 PM |
| Wow, congratulations! A very striking photo, seems very genuine... great processing too. This is the picture of desolation but your score is jubilation ;-) |
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06/25/2006 06:58:48 PM |
| This is truly a captivating image. The child's expression and the way she looks are perfect for your interpretation of the challenge theme. Very well done, and I do hope you do well. |
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06/25/2006 05:11:05 PM |
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06/25/2006 10:09:48 AM |
| Beautiful and hard to look at the same time. I feel that you captured the emotion very well. I would have loved to see a bit more space around her. |
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06/24/2006 02:40:44 PM |
| Good b&w and frame filling. Timeless, great capture of emotion. 10 |
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06/23/2006 07:03:21 PM |
| completely convincing model, and a composition that makes her the unambiguous focus of the picture. 8. |
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06/23/2006 02:23:07 PM |
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06/22/2006 06:06:56 AM |
| Curious to know what the setup was here ... I'm assuming it wasn't what it looks like. Definitely a good compoition and authentic feeling here. 8 |
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06/21/2006 07:09:18 AM |
| Emotive, well composed and fits the theme to a "T". 10 Nice tones and contrast too. |
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06/20/2006 03:41:51 PM |
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06/20/2006 11:23:37 AM |
| Rather sad image.. or should I say an image of a sad young lady. Not appealing therefore it must be desolate, right? |
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06/20/2006 06:02:58 AM |
| excellent impactful image...superb as a b and w |
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06/19/2006 06:23:55 PM |
| Awwwwww. How sad! Nice photo for this challenge. It does raise a desolate feeling in my heart even thinking about a beautiful little girl like her being abandoned. |
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06/19/2006 03:45:09 AM |
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06/18/2006 08:32:47 PM |
| Super candid. The tones are amazing, and you've captured a wonderful moment very artfully 9 |
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