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08/28/2006 06:24:02 AM |
nice curve with that fire lighting |
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07/04/2006 01:03:48 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Self portraits are never easy. This is an effective self portrait with interesting lighting and an unusual pose.
The Challenge was to illustrate the effect of Bokeh and your shot does not do that.
Getting good Bokeh effect is as much about the lens and camera as well as good Depth of field. (shallow) the out of focus background needs also to be presented by a pattern that blurs well into interesting abstracts for example water drops glistening in sunlight.
The wood pattern on your bed board might look OK in stronger light with a deeper depth of field.
Chris
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06/27/2006 06:56:03 PM |
Too much of this is in focus for it to be considered bokeh. Also you color balance is off, you have a red/yellow color cast over your entire image. |
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06/27/2006 03:02:54 PM |
Interesting lighting, but this isn't really bokeh. |
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06/26/2006 10:49:59 PM |
Umm... Where's the bokeh? |
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06/25/2006 10:28:18 PM |
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06/25/2006 01:19:43 PM |
The challenge was to take a photo whose subject is enhanced by the bokeh of the background, but here you did it backwards, the cabinet in the background is quite clear, while the bum in the foreground is somewhat blurry.
Blurry Bokah Bum. Say that fast 3 times! hehe |
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06/24/2006 05:13:42 AM |
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06/24/2006 01:11:03 AM |
Interesting. I think the crop needs to be made either horizontal or angled as it cuts the subject harshly....the bokeh needs to be stronger...but I still give you points for courage. I know what it is like to have your body being judged as well as your photo...and it does make the week go longer and the voting more personal. So I aplaud you in your endeavour. 7. |
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06/23/2006 07:32:40 AM |
Not a good example of Bokeh IMO. Otherwise, lighting is interesting. |
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06/22/2006 06:09:32 PM |
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06/21/2006 08:19:31 PM |
The proper pronounciation is "Bo..Kay".... not Butt...crack...:O)
Seriously though, I do not see any "Bokeh" in this image. This factor, coupled with the lighting, composition and cropping, may result in a lower than average score. |
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06/21/2006 07:06:35 PM |
I think this might not meet the challenge. Also it looks like you are mooning DPC. |
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06/21/2006 11:31:52 AM |
Seems that there's no bokeh to speak of here... |
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06/21/2006 06:01:01 AM |
Sorry, I don't see bokeh. |
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06/20/2006 10:23:48 PM |
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06/20/2006 08:45:40 PM |
It certainally has a very dark background but it does seem to be in focus. |
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06/20/2006 08:31:39 PM |
doesnt really fit the contest nice pic tho |
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