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06/27/2006 02:20:38 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: The image is nicely crisp and well-focused, but I think that I'd like to see this one with a much more shallow depth of field. While the background is not terribly overpowering, it is still a bit distracting.
Lighting: I think that the lighting is too harsh. I do like the backlit feeling of the animal skin, and the nicely contrasting shadows cast by her working hands, but the entire frame seems a bit washed out.
Composition/Content: I believe that your choice of subject matter is the strongest element of this image. This is a lady doing something that is well out of the ordinary in today's technology-dependent society. So, terrific subject, but the composition is a bit off. I see some literal framing, but the framed feeling of the image could have used more attention.
My Opinion: Nice work meeting the challenge in a very creative way, and with very creative subject matter. I think this one would have pulled a better score with some lighting adjustments. As it is, I think that it scored pretty close to its potential.
Eric
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06/20/2006 06:28:46 PM |
excellent use of backlighting. one can sense the soul of the subject, or at least the soul of the work. 9. |
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06/14/2006 04:50:25 PM |
Nice, the way the frame is actually part of the action, not an artificial addition. |
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06/14/2006 02:09:45 PM |
Society of Creative Anachronism? |
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06/14/2006 05:22:10 AM |
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