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06/07/2006 06:47:12 PM |
| This has been well taken, and love the DOF..... |
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06/07/2006 03:28:56 PM |
| I don't really like the crop too much. Maybe if the brances on the right were cropped out... |
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06/07/2006 01:51:51 PM |
| Nice... simple, but nice :) |
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06/07/2006 10:38:13 AM |
This image suffers from a lack of focal point. We're too distant from your subject. Getting much closer and picking out a detail would give the viewer something to find rather than scanning your whole scene for a fragment of interest. You have some good lighting here so it's a shame not to make use of it.
You could try:
> shooting into the sun through a leaf
> creating negative space from leaf and branch shapes
> finding intense light/shadow in texture on leaves
> shooting at an extreme angle either from base of trunk/branch or looking down from above
> try creating exaggerated bokeh by using your zoom and focusing on a small aspect of subject
Sadly, you will get hammered in the voting but put it down to experience and move on. I have given this a 3 because of the above points and the overexposure in the sky. |
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06/07/2006 04:23:39 AM |
| Definitely fits the challenge. Background is nicely out of focus. Overall the image seems a bit uninteresting. |
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