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06/13/2006 10:59:22 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: While your focus is nice and crisp on the driver's face, your depth of field choice looses some much needed detail in this image.
Lighting: Your lighting is very nice. Everythings seems evenly lit, and you lost no detail in your highlights or shadows.
Composition/Content: The composition you chose is the main strength of this image. The toy is up front in the viewer's face, but positioned very nicely to draw the eye deep into the frame and back to the fire.
My Opinion: I think this one is far superior to your original entry, as did the voters. I believe that it would be even better with a slightly deeper depth of field.
Eric
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06/12/2006 10:38:46 AM |
Djabordjabor I presume? Very nice improvement over the original. The DOF is very shallow, bringing me to the driver, nice. The shot isn't as cluttered and the colors are very nicely done. And you removed that irritating passenger, LOL The original got a 5 from me, the Take Two gets an 8 for improvement and originality :) |
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06/09/2006 08:33:59 PM |
Hahahaha.....now that is extreme. |
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06/07/2006 11:11:33 AM |
I'd like to see the depth of field just a bit deeper in this photo. |
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06/06/2006 04:53:11 PM |
Robo lego. A little mor dof would have been nice. |
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06/06/2006 09:25:51 AM |
Lol! Gotta score high for comedy value! |
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