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06/11/2006 11:17:35 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Everything looks nicely focused, and your coloring works well for this image.
Lighting: I think that this one is a bit overexposed. The bright wall behind the jug seems blown out, as does the detail in the rug underneath.
Composition/Content: I think that the wall taking up over 1/3 of frame hurt the scoring. It adds a very crowded feeling to the image and adds a great distraction to the eye.
My Opinion: I don't get an empty room feeling from this particular image. I think it scored pretty close to its potential as it is, but with some small adjustments in several areas, it could have done much better.
Eric
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06/11/2006 07:30:38 PM |
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06/09/2006 04:09:50 AM |
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06/06/2006 04:52:49 PM |
| I do not feel the emptiness of the room because such a small part of it is shown. |
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06/06/2006 02:21:41 AM |
| :-) am i missing something here ? i mean i see the room (part) and a thing but where is the creativity and idea ? |
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06/05/2006 10:51:42 PM |
| I find this picture strange. I think the plain wall on the right is pretty uninteresting, and yet takes up 40% of the picture - it could have been cropped. The rug is quite busy. The blue pot is unusual, but hasn't been placed in a position that makes me interested in it. |
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06/05/2006 03:00:30 PM |
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06/05/2006 01:09:11 PM |
| Image is a bit noisy, seems a bit washed out. Bright colours are good, but the big empty wall is distracting. |
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06/05/2006 11:55:49 AM |
| Like the sharpness of the urn,and color.... |
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06/04/2006 10:52:31 PM |
| MMMMM this is choice can see this in one of the home and garden mags full marks 10 |
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