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06/26/2006 12:54:46 AM |
| I wish she was looking straight at me :( But sheesh, just like the first one, this is an awesome and inspiring image. I only wish I could take portrait like these ;) |
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06/08/2006 02:58:17 PM |
| nice photo but her expression looks really "fake", maybe she's too made-up ??? |
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06/08/2006 11:07:40 AM |
great girl, but her face looks pretty posed
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06/06/2006 03:46:22 PM |
Obviously a beautiful girl, but to me she doesn't seem very relaxed or happy to be there. The pose looks too uncomfortable and unnatural to me. Something is going on with her expression that I can't figure out. Her eyes seem too wide open? A little glazed over?
I think you could do better with a more relaxed pose, and with the model looking at the camera.
Because it is so brighly lit, you have a bit of an issue with her skin tones, which vary from quite fair (her chest and upper arms) to very tan (lower arms and face). Either through lighting or processing you probably want a more even skin tone. |
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06/05/2006 06:38:26 PM |
This is also a great shot of the same model. Still great lighting, smile etc. I think it might be improved just a little by getting the camera down even with her face. Keep up the good work.
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06/05/2006 08:42:50 AM |
| Cool shot & pose. Terrific lighting. The difference in skin tones between the model's face and her body is evident and a little distracting, but still a great image. |
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06/05/2006 08:29:33 AM |
| I'm much more fond of your #4 from this shoot. I think it's her expression that's bothering me. Because she is closer, you can read her expression much better, but all it's telling me is "how much longer do I have to hold this smile?!?". Having her look into the camera would probably have helped too. |
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06/05/2006 07:59:31 AM |
The angle is a little too 'up the nose' for me here. It would have worked better to shoot more over her head and have her look up at you. I think that since we can't see the rest of her body, the pose with her torso up in the air makes her body look too masculine (and that is saying alot with this model) and top heavy, and the angle accentuates it. Her bicep is much too pronounced for such a pretty girl. H
Again, your lighting is really nice. No shadows in the wrong places, and that is tough on a pose like this. |
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06/05/2006 07:16:40 AM |
Like obsidian, I like the comp and angle.
Since the body and feet are out of the shot, had you though of doing something else with the arms? SOmething to maybe see the ring on her left hand?
Same thing, I wish the shoulder wasn't in front of the chin (personal preference).
I'd also clone out the second catch light at the bottome of her eyes (or whatever the lightish spot is)
Again, all my personal opinion. Nice work! |
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06/05/2006 07:04:19 AM |
| This is a good picture - I like the composition and the angle that the model is lying in. But - and it is only a small but - the make up tone on the face is very different to the overall skin tone of the model and this jars a little to me. It seems to make too much of the face which impacts the overall compositional "tone". |
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