I would have liked to see the pupils dialated a little less, not all the way as you're trying to put the subject in a dark place, but these eyes almost all black and your title is about blue. I would also suggest doing something else with the blue jeans, I feel it takes away from the impact of the eyes being in color as they have more area to consume than the small eyes. They don't necessarily have to be taken down to black and white but perhaps a more subdued color, maybe just a little less saturated, or perhaps that part converted to a brown or whatever you felt looks good.
I saw the comment below me and I agree, the thumb by itself takes away from the photo, however I think a whole hand would be fine.
Now as for the emotion you're trying to bring out, I wasn't sure if it was sadness, or pain, or scorn (yeah i dunno why i see that but I do) or something else. The colors point me towards one of the first two but I think it's not perfectly clear. |