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06/08/2006 10:18:25 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: The gaussian blur makes it a it difficult to tell where your focus is. Even beyond the GB, I can still see some crisp focus on the nails and the rings. I believe I would have opened up the aperture a bit to add some blur to the background. This would have helped isolate the subject off the background a bit better.
Lighting: Your lighting is very nice and very even. The subject is lit very nicely, and the darker background helps isolate your subject.
Composition/Content: I like your choice for a centered composition here. I think an even tighter crop would have made it even better.
My Opinion: Nice job meeting the challenge. With a little less blur on the foreground and a little more on the background, this one would have pulled an even better score.
Eric
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06/06/2006 02:08:07 PM |
| nice shot, good choice of background |
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06/03/2006 01:19:13 PM |
| Nice composition, clever background. |
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06/03/2006 09:37:23 AM |
doesnt seem to be composed properly, the hands look a little ghostly
also, could perhaps use some sharpening
and would be preferred if the background was pushed out of focus a bit more |
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06/02/2006 05:39:45 PM |
| cool picture, reminds me of my friendship picture. 8 |
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06/01/2006 06:30:06 PM |
| Well composed, nice background. Only thing that seems "off" is the skin tone IMHO. |
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06/01/2006 06:23:39 PM |
| I like the plant behind the hands. |
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06/01/2006 02:51:33 PM |
| Good job. I would've tweaked with the lighting. And I wonder what would've happened if the cropping was a little different? |
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05/31/2006 02:04:25 PM |
| I think you might have been just a little more careful with your background - such a simple set-up is easily defeated by the odd discoloured leaf in that foliage. |
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05/31/2006 08:19:00 AM |
| But they are "holding hands" rather than wanting to...... |
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