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06/07/2006 03:46:27 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a cute take on the challenge. It does meet the Beatles song lyrics/title requirement, but I think it's downfall in voting was probably the fact that it looks more like a vacation snapshot than a planned image for submission in a contest. The composition is a bit too centered. Perhaps cropping on the left and getting in a bit closer would help. It also appears that they are just walking by the car and not actually attempting to drive it, so that might have played on your score a bit. However, 5.6 is nothing to sneeze at. I'd take it and run. ;)
Keep shooting and let me know if you have any questions. :)
Take care,
Laurie |
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06/06/2006 06:46:10 PM |
very effective...glad this isn't cropped any tighter..love the sense of place.. |
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06/06/2006 12:36:31 PM |
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06/05/2006 12:09:52 AM |
nice shot...obviously candid...I just wish we could see more of her |
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06/03/2006 09:09:46 PM |
crop on left would have improved it I think ... but I love the feeling |
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06/03/2006 04:47:24 AM |
the woman behind the man is a bit distracting. probably would have been better w/nobody in the shot and just the car and wall |
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06/01/2006 06:10:35 PM |
Nice shot, but fitting it to the title is hard for me. I don't get any feeling of a connection between the people and the car, nor the people to themselves for that matter. |
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05/31/2006 04:43:30 PM |
Neat setting! The splash of red in the skirt really makes the photo. |
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05/31/2006 03:04:14 PM |
Maybe if she was in front of him, with her red skirt contrasting with the most B&W environment... What do you think? |
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05/31/2006 11:28:15 AM |
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05/31/2006 08:04:49 AM |
you haven't got the lyric quite right. Nice photo though |
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05/31/2006 04:56:23 AM |
I've got no car and it's breaking my heart,
but I found this shrimpy three-wheeler and that's a start |
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05/30/2006 08:46:48 PM |
Made me laugh, well done! |
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