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06/08/2006 11:04:22 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club Noella!
At first glance I find the shot to be creatively funny. The look on his face is priceles and I think that this was a great idea.
A couple of things that I think might improve the shot. I sort of understand the tight crop here but you went a bit far with his head and the plate of money. Leaves a sense of incompleteness on the image. Also, the DOF here calls for a smaller aperture (around f8 or so) as it gets a bit of a blur on his left hand and face. Sometimes a shallow DOF is needed but with the hands being a major part of the composition here I think you need both in focus.
Overall a good effort Noella.
Thanks for the opportunity to critique this image!
Cheers - Phil |
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06/06/2006 12:37:54 PM |
| wish we saw more of the money, not sure why it is on a plate |
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06/05/2006 04:32:15 PM |
| a little more DOF to get the other hand sharp. creative |
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06/03/2006 01:37:22 PM |
| Very cute take on the challenge. |
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05/31/2006 05:44:03 PM |
| Hypocracy at its height. very well done. Bump. |
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05/31/2006 01:19:58 PM |
| flash seems kinda hot and the picture a bit flat but I love the creativity ... cute idea |
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05/31/2006 01:18:11 PM |
Neat idea for the shot but a couple of things are distracting. First the models shirt design. A simpler shirt would have looked better. Your use of flash makes the lighting very harsh and flat and causes the hard shadows. Lastly, the money seems to be a little soft and it's supposed to be a main part of the subject according to your title...
TC |
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05/31/2006 11:49:46 AM |
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05/31/2006 01:43:14 AM |
NOTE.... I'm looking at the image first and tyrying to guess the title. If I can't guess, I can't give high marks :-(
yeah - that works |
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05/30/2006 11:05:42 PM |
| Pass it over here. I'll take seconds. ;P Cute & clever. Not fond of the head cut off though. |
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