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06/07/2006 11:43:23 AM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Fun concept, but lighting comes across as a bit on the green side.
Composition:
I appreciate the use of negative space, but I think it should be in front of the subject rather than behind the subject.
Subject:
Clear in your face composition, subject is well defined by the lightsource.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: As mentioned earlier it seems a bit on the green side.
Focus looks sharp.
Light: Very good, it illuminates just what you wanted illuminated.
To grow its vote?:
A little stronger composition would have helped some. Not sure a "batman" theme would score real high in most challenges though.
Summary:
I like it. It's fun and nicely done. Keep up the good work.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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06/06/2006 05:32:39 AM |
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06/05/2006 09:01:58 PM |
Um. A Chubby Batman.
Heheh, silly. |
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06/04/2006 06:18:32 PM |
| I don't know what Batman has to do with Satan, but the shot is cool. |
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06/03/2006 03:28:26 PM |
| Needs a little more contrast in the tips of the ears. The outline is TOO faint. (Yes my monitor is calibrated...) |
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06/03/2006 11:53:32 AM |
| Soft lighting works in this image....9 |
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06/02/2006 06:15:45 PM |
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06/01/2006 07:43:38 PM |
| well done with the lighting and the expression. Together they really set a mood |
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06/01/2006 05:46:53 AM |
| Perhaps a little cropping required? |
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05/31/2006 06:00:42 PM |
| Nice idea. The image could be brighter in my opinion especially the details in the shadow areas, which the calibrated-challenged might not be able to see. |
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05/31/2006 03:32:33 PM |
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05/31/2006 02:15:19 PM |
| ooo, love the eyes, maybe you could have lit the top part and the ears a bit more, and left out the bottom half of the face, or turned to B&W |
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05/31/2006 05:24:45 AM |
| uha... frightening look. Well done :o) |
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05/31/2006 01:35:19 AM |
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