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06/08/2006 10:42:54 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Everything in your frame is nicely focused. Your colors are spot on, this your chosen white balance is also on.
Lighting: You chose a great time of day for this capture. Your lighting produced a very peaceful feeling with great highlight and mild shadows.
Composition/Content: The composition is a bit too busy and feels too crowded for my personal taste. I think composing this one without the blue envelope or the glass on the left would have loosened it up a great deal.
My Opinion: Terrific job meeting the challenge, and with a slight composition change, this one would have scored much higher.
Eric
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06/02/2006 01:06:58 PM |
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05/31/2006 07:52:28 PM |
| The glasses probably should have been left out. They add too many reflections and shadows. they also seem to cram the sides, like you were trying to fill the frame. The shot appear to be well focused with a very good DOF. It fits the challenge well. |
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05/31/2006 02:07:31 PM |
| There are seven bits of stuff here - and I don't think the idea really needs more than two; simplifying would help, but there's little sense of shape to your arrangement of those objects either. |
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