::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Nice!
Composition:
Love the composition. I really does a LOT to make this photo, especially with the clouds floating overhead.
Subject:
She's right there, nothing to distract from her.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color is good, so is focus.
Light:The glare on the cheek and nose, I think I would have tried to clone out, just a bit distracting.
Other: I also would have done a bit of desat on the teeth to get rid of a bit of yellowing.
To grow its vote?:
Kill the other entrants :-) Actually, it was just a tough challenge and pretty girls alone just don't go far with voters.
Summary:
I really like this photo. I'm sure she does too.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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