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08/22/2007 12:37:59 AM |
I like this the smoke looks like a little breakdancer standing on his arm and leg. |
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06/23/2006 08:56:00 AM |
Love it! This is great. Well done. |
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06/07/2006 04:31:46 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club! :)
This is certainly a well-done image, with a great score and placement in the challenge results. I think you did a good job in directing yourself. ;) Technically, all the important stuff has been covered...composition, clarity, focus, color, lighting...though I might like it filling the frame a bit more, but that's just me. I am a little distracted by your right earlobe...the bright spot there in an otherwise-dark part of the image does tend to pull the eye away. Other than that, I think you placed where I would have scored you and I am impressed with your image.
Keep shooting and let me know if you have any questions! :)
Take care,
Laurie |
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06/07/2006 01:54:13 AM |
Guess I shouldn't have given you that high score, eh? No, wait, even changing it to a 1 wouldn't have let me beat you ;) Truthfully, I think this should have place higher! |
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06/06/2006 09:11:23 PM |
good capture of feeling, just what I love about fotos |
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06/06/2006 03:56:50 PM |
Great job. I made my husband smoke two cigars in the garage while trying to get a similar shot...didn't get the pic but he did get a stomach ache! Great lighting - the smoke looks clean and I like the crop. Good luck. |
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06/06/2006 11:57:31 AM |
very interesting...great details. |
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06/05/2006 11:57:35 PM |
Good pic Good pic!! although i think its better if its abit more to the center. but thats me :) |
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06/04/2006 06:23:06 PM |
Comp and lighting are great. |
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06/03/2006 06:28:39 PM |
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06/03/2006 12:04:08 PM |
been used before but never fails to amaze...8 |
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06/02/2006 03:44:51 PM |
I love how you caught the wisp of smoke so perfectly! |
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06/02/2006 01:42:57 PM |
I like the idea, I even thought about posting something similar. The lighting is really good but I am not very fond of the composition. I think you should have made him tilt his head downwards a little or include more of his forehead. Something is not working for me here. 6 |
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06/02/2006 12:25:13 PM |
Brilliant shot and interesting portrait |
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06/02/2006 09:33:01 AM |
Neat idea. I love the capture of the smoke 9 |
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06/01/2006 10:52:01 PM |
Evocative ... of my father, lighting his face on fire, a chronic smoker... lit up with the (enevaible) oxygen supply ... |
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06/01/2006 09:19:47 AM |
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05/31/2006 08:28:24 PM |
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05/31/2006 04:31:44 PM |
Clone out his earlobe and maybe a slight Neat image if you have it! Otherwise nice. |
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05/31/2006 02:49:28 PM |
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05/31/2006 07:47:33 AM |
Good picture (although he is smoking hm :o) |
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05/31/2006 12:10:48 AM |
Good use of single light source. Focus is tack sharp. Excellent stop action on the smoke |
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