==Greetings from the Critique Club==
Composition
My eye wanders a lot as I study this shot. There are really no leading lines, and there are no points that I can easily focus on. The shadows are dominant and the crop seems a little bit off. I wish I could offer more constructive advice here, but I'm not sure of what I would do to improve this particular composition.
Camera Technicals
The histogram is probably acceptable, but the harsh lighting makes this a higher contrast picture than I think would work best. Softer lighting would have made this a more "sensual" image, I believe.
Post Processing
Here again, the overall result seems a little more harsh than optimal.
Challenge
You've very clearly met the challenge description. I doubt there was much question about that, as the use of shadows emphasize it.
Overall Impression
To me, this is a confusing image to look at, and the subject is hard to define. However, as a bit of an abstract, it is well done and technically good. It creates more questions than it answers, and it leaves me questioning what the photographer is attempting to communicate. I did not vote in this challenge, but probably would have given this a 6 or 7.
I hope you find these thoughts to be helpful and constructive. Keep up the good work! This is a good score. |
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